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Greenbooks guest post: unexpected journey; predictable break

September 1, 2012 at 12:56 am by newsfrombree  - 

Now that we have three films to think about, one of the questions a lot of people are wondering is: “How will this affect the screenplay for The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey?”. Just where will the first film end? In this Greenbooks guest post, Thomas Monteath outlines his thoughts on just how the first Hobbit film could work. These views are his own, and do not necessarily represent those of TheOneRing.net or its staff.

WARNING: Spoilers and speculation!

An Unexpected Journey, but a predictable break point

A guest post by Tomas Monteath

There are a range of views to be found on the internet with regard to the likely break point for the first Hobbit film. These have included following ‘riddles in the dark’ with Gollum; the dwarves being cornered by the Wargs; arrival at Beorn’s house. Largely, these views are preoccupied with ‘stuff that happens’ in the book, rather than focusing on what is much more important from a narrative perspective: characters, and their arcs.

Successful adaptation aren’t blow-by-blow recreations

It is important to remember that a successful adaptation does not focus on recreating blow-by-blow scenes of the source material. When doing an adaptation, the writers must focus on key themes and key characters. This is all the more important in the case of a story like The Hobbit, where much is left to the imagination and thus the film makers must fill in the gaps.

Whereas a tightly written, dialogue-centric scene like Riddles in the Dark will likely be on screen for about as long in the film as it took to read in the book, some other scenes with less dialogue will need to be hugely expanded, as film is a visual medium. It will take time to show what Tolkien may have described in a sentence (he was notoriously abstract about battle scenes, for instance, probably because he was a First World War veteran who found himself wanting to keep the scent of battle at arms length).

One logical break point

There is thus only one place at which to end film one, and that is with the Dwarves internment by the Wood-elves. If it had remained a two film adaptation, then it perhaps made sense for the first film to include Barrels Out of Bond — the escape from the Wood-elves in barrels down the river. But that escape is likely to be an elaborately choreographed sequence, as Bilbo springs the various dwarves from their cells and evades the guards. Thus it fits better as an opening action/thriller scene to launch the second film, much as the Balrog sequence opened The Two Towers.

The notion that the films could break earlier than the Company’s capture by the Wood-elves simply holds no water. Bear in mind that the progression from Bag End to Goblin Town, and even the escape from Goblin Town, is virtually identical to the first half of Fellowship of the Ring (Hobbiton; the journey to Rivendell; Rivendell itself; the climb into the mountains; Moria; the Cave Troll/Balrog sequence; the fellowship’s escape into Lorien).

But we need to remember that Fellowship of the Ring had another hour or so of screen time thereafter. In other words, Riddles in the Dark is simply too early in the story to break the film, as is the Company’s encirclement by Wargs. But more importantly, from a narrative perspective, it would mean the film has a beginning, a middle, but no end. For every story needs three acts — setup, conflict, resolution.

The first act

Assuming the Hobbit films will be three hours each, the first act (or hour, if you prefer) will be the setup: from the establishment of the Company and the stakes at Bag End (this scene is likely to be quite long, with flashbacks explaining: how Gandalf came across the key and map; the halcyon days of Erebor and Dale to show what motivates the Dwarves; how those dominions were laid waste by Smaug to show what the quest must overcome if it is to be successful); the journey into the Wild; the encounter with trolls (and discovery of the swords in their cave); the Company’s arrival in Rivendell.

Here there will likely be the meeting of the White Council, and Elrond’s outline of the history to the swords the Company found in the trolls’ cave (including flashbacks to illustrate the history of Dwarf/Goblin antagonism, likely including the Battle of Azanulbizar and the role of Azog). This first act will therefore be the expository setup for both the rest of the film and the whole trilogy.

The second act

The second hour will be the meat of the conflict that must be resolved in the story. The core of this conflict is the Dwarves’ lack of faith, confidence and respect for Bilbo (bearing in mind that the heart of any drama is character). This is, of course, thrown into sharp relief under the pressure of the events that occur and the challenges they face: the climb into the misty mountains during the storm, and the danger from Stone Giants; their capture by and escape from the Goblins; Bilbo meeting with and outwitting of Gollum; his subsequent reunion with the Dwarves; the Company being chased up trees by wargs.

This second act will thus be the conflict at the heart of the film because the Company is in peril throughout, threatened with being killed/eaten, and under threat of being divided both psychologically (Bilbo is treated with doubt and disdain by the Dwarves, a situation that only begins to change when he finds them following his meeting with Gollum) and physically (Bilbo is abandoned both in the Goblin tunnels, and later when the Dwarves first climb the trees to escape the Wargs).

In short, throughout the second act there is the constant threat that the quest could be brought to a premature and bloody end. These trials need to be passed, and in it, Bilbo must ‘find his courage’ and silence the Dwarves’ criticism of him.

The third act

The third act is therefore needed for not only a resolution to the conflicts in the second act (in this third act, far from doubting Bilbo, they begin to cultivate a kernel of faith in him, something that will blossom in the second film as Bilbo becomes the de-facto leader of the Company), and the set-up for the next film. This hour will likely include their escape from the wargs via the eagles; the eagles aerie; introductions to Beorn; Beorn’s house; the road to Mirkwood; Gandalf’s departure at its eaves; the Company’s journey through Mirkwood (including Bombur’s incident at the river); the incident with the spiders; capture by the Wood-elves.

Intercut with these later scenes will no doubt be scenes of Gandalf, travelling down the western edge of Mirkwood seeking Radagast, or perhaps scouting out Dol Guldur (the actual assault of Dol Guldur will likely be a large part of the second film).

This third act will thus have a resolution of the conflicts of act two (the threats to their lives, and the beginnings of a change in the Dwarves’ attitude towards Mr Baggins), a reunion of Bilbo with the Company, and then a necessary recuperation at Beorn’s to allow the audience to catch its breath after a long middle act fraught with danger and tension. It will then have the final scenes that both throw them all back into the fire (spiders), and in doing set up a cliffhanger (incarceration by the Wood-elves) to draw the audience back for film two.

It’s all about the character arc

In speculating on the structure and plotting of these adaptations, and particularly the break points between films, it is important to put character and their arcs before a concern with the length or brevity of particular scenes as found in the book. Once we do this, it becomes quite plain what the structure is likely to be.

Engaging characters have a clear arc, and when we put these arcs at the heart of the film then the natural break points become clear.

Thomas Monteath is a life-long Tolkien aficionado, who still believes –- with apologies to the excellent Andy Serkis -– that the finest Gollum was Peter Woodthorpe in the BBC’s 1981 Radio adaptation. In real life he an academic in the UK, who can on occasion be found propping up the bar at the Eagle & Child.

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14 responses to “Greenbooks guest post: unexpected journey; predictable break”

  1. I agree with most of this, but I still think a more logical breaking point would be when Gandalf leaves the company at the edge of Mirkwood. It would make for an emotional ending as Bilbo watches his friend and protector ride away, leaving him with a bunch of dwarves who are doubtful of his abilities. Indeed Bilbo would be doubtful of himself as well. He would have to “find his courage” to follow the dwarves into the forest, perhaps after Gandalf gives him some encouragement, much like he does later for Frodo in Moria. The second film would then allow us to see Bilbo’s personal growth as a hero and as the leader of the company, and we could see the dwarves’ esteem of him grow over the course of the events in Mirkwood and Erebor as well. I agree that the films need to follow character arcs, but to get audiences emotionally invested in the characters I think it would be most effective to end the first film on something of an emotional cliffhanger in which the hero and general audiences won’t know what to expect in the next film.

    Of course, PJ is going to structure it in whatever way he feels is best. So I guess there’s little point to doing a lot of speculation. We’ll all get to see how it turns out this December. Until then, I just wish they’d give us a new trailer to watch!

  2. Shayan says:

    an excellent article

  3. Timuk says:

    I think we already have a the clue as to when he first film breaks from the final production video – the filming of the final take – “where are you going?” “to find answers” (or words to that effect).

  4. Bildo says:

    Thanks for this- I now feel a lot better about a third film somehow… 🙂

  5. Tuor son of Huor says:

    This seems like a well-written and carefully considered article but I still am not sure that I agree about the capture in Mirkwood being the ideal place to end the first film. Cliffhanger endings are very tricky things to pull off well, and I can’t imagine that the Dwarves and Bilbo getting captured by the elves would provide a satisfactory resolution to the first film. Whilst it’s true that character arcs are an important feature of any film, the story still needs to have a satisfying conclusion, and I can’t imagine a cheap cliffhanger really working for this.
    Looking back at The Lord of the Rings films we can see that Peter Jackson likes to end on an emotional high point, but with a certain sense of foreboding to ensure that the audience will want to know what happens next. My theory is that the escape from the elves and subsequent journey down the river will still be included in the first film, with the last shot of film one being the glimpse of the Lonely Mountain that Bilbo gets on rounding a bend in the river (start of Chapter 10). Both The Fellowship of the Ring and The Two Towers ended in similar ways, with glimpses of The Land of Shadow showing what was still to come.
    This ending would also provide a nice conclusion to the story of the first film – it is after all entitled “An Unexpected Journey”, and the goal of that journey is to reach the Lonely Mountain.
    Anyway, in about a hundred days we’ll all know. . .

  6. Great analysis and can’t argue with any points! An insightful and well thought-out article.

  7. SaveTheEnts says:

    I’m struck by the similarities between Jackson’s interpretation of “The Fellowship of the Ring” and Tomas Monteath’s take on “An Unexpected Journey”. Here are a few examples:

    FOTR Hobbit Part 11: Party at Bag End Party at Bag End2: Waylaid in the wild (Ringwraiths) Waylaid in the wild (Trolls)3: Layover in Rivendell Layover in Rivendell4: Trouble with goblins (Moria) Trouble with goblins (Pass through Misty Mountains) 5: Gandalf departs (after battle with balrog) Gandalf departs (prior to Bilbo & Co. entering Mirkwood)6: Capture of a few (Merry & Pippin) Capture of a few (Thorin and the rest of the Dwarves)7: Pursuit (Aragorn & Co. chase after M&P) Pursuit (Bilbo chases after the Dwarves)
    Initially, I felt fairly confident that “An Unexpected Journey” would conclude after Gandalf, Bilbo, and the Dwarves leave Beorn’s house, but now I’m inclined to agree with Tomas. Can’t wait for December 14!!!

  8. SaveTheEnts says:

    I’m struck by the similarities
    between Jackson’s interpretation of “The Fellowship of the Ring” and
    Tomas Monteath’s take on “An Unexpected Journey”. Here are a few
    examples:

    FOTR

    1: Party at Bag End

    2: Waylaid in the wild
    (Ringwraiths)

    3: Layover in Rivendell

    4: Trouble with goblins
    (Moria)

    5: Gandalf departs (after
    battle with balrog)

    6: Capture of a few (Merry
    & Pippin)

    7: Pursuit (Aragorn & Co.
    chase after M&P)

    Hobbit Part 1

    1: Party at Bag End
    2: Waylaid in the wild (Trolls)
    3: Layover in Rivendell
    4: Trouble with goblins (Pass through Misty Mountains)
    5: Gandalf departs (prior to Bilbo & Co. entering Mirkwood)

    6: Capture of a few (Thorin and the rest of the Dwarves)

    7: Pursuit (Bilbo chases after the Dwarves)

    Initially, I felt fairly confident
    that “An Unexpected Journey” would conclude after Gandalf, Bilbo, and
    the Dwarves leave Beorn’s house, but now I’m inclined to agree with Tomas.
    Can’t wait for December 14!!!

  9. Odd Gelki says:

    I think a logical end to the first film would be up on the mountain with the Eagles. There is the relief and resolution of being saved from the Wargs, the peril of Bilbo hanging from the Dwarf’s legs, the uncertainty (on Bilbo’s behalf) of the Eagles’ intentions and what will happen next, and the epic views of flight and from the mountain top. That could put Bilbo in a similar position as Sam and Frodo at the end of the Fellowship movie for emotional expression and set up the next film with an exciting beginning of flight down from the mountains. I think the Dwarves’ and Gandalf’s back stories should be slowly revealed and interwoven across the first two films instead of in big blocks. I also think their stay at Beorn’s should be quirky and have a facet of dark mystery and fear since they are in a house of a Werebear surrounded at night by potential death.

  10. Guest says:

    I agree with the ending postulated here. The spider battle and then capture by the wood elves with cliffhanger ending.

  11. blair85 says:

    I’ve been saying this is the most logical breaking point for months, but nobody else seemed to agree with me until now

  12. Fran says:

    I agree. Peter Woodthorpe is the finest.

  13. Jim says:

    Sauron/Necromancer is a major and complicated villain in the film adaptations of the Hobbit though so I don’t think they could fit the whole Dol Goldur story along with Gandalf and the Council in one movie, probably the part with Sauron/Necromancer and the rest of the end of Dol Goldur will be in the third movie.

  14. I feel the best place to end “An Unexpected Journey” is with the Company’s entry into Mirkwood. With the final scene depicting Gandalf galloping away to the unknown, and the Company plunging into a dark and dangerous forest, their fate uncertain. It’s not cheap like leaving them trapped in the Elvenking’s halls, or utterly lame like ending with the Wargs and the Eagles’ arrival. It’s not even a cliffhanger.

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