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CuriousG
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May 16, 10:25pm

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TBH, I actively resist the conceit of LOTR as memoir [In reply to] Can't Post

People can believe what they want, but it's never, ever worked for me as a reader, for the reasons you give plus others of my own. Far too much of it feels like cramming square pegs in round holes. I love LOTR, and it's OK that it's not a memoir.


Ethel Duath
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May 16, 10:47pm

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Memories, but not a memoir. [In reply to] Can't Post

For one thing, I think we see/sense/are at times explicitly told too much about the "insides" of some of the characters for it feel or read as if it's written largely from the personal point of view of other individuals from within the books. In fact, when I first read about the idea of Bilbo and Frodo doing much of the writing, it actually came as a shock, because I just couldn't make that fit into my experience of reading the story. (I read the books at least twice before giving the prologue or the appendices more than a brief glance).

I see and feel things from Treebeard's or Aragorn's or Gandalf's, or even Saruman's perspective; and not just from them personally, but with them operating from and steeped in the particular flavor of the culture or history belonging to that character, which for me at least just doesn't allow it to hold together as if it was from the point of view of an internal character.

Some of it of course does sound like that, but at points where (ahem) it was "meant to," like Sam in Mordor.



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CuriousG
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May 17, 3:35am

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Good point. I love the narrator, but [In reply to] Can't Post

it's too omniscient to be a character from the story, at least to me.

And building on what you said, it dilutes the reading experience for me to be inside someone's heart & head in at times intimate ways, and then be told that Bilbo/Frodo knew exactly what they were feeling and wrote it all down. We discussed the Faramir/Eowyn love story recently. Was Merry really a voyeur, scribing it all down for Frodo to publish? Just too problematic for me.


Silvered-glass
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May 17, 7:27am

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Characters and Point of View [In reply to] Can't Post

 

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For one thing, I think we see/sense/are at times explicitly told too much about the "insides" of some of the characters for it feel or read as if it's written largely from the personal point of view of other individuals from within the books. In fact, when I first read about the idea of Bilbo and Frodo doing much of the writing, it actually came as a shock, because I just couldn't make that fit into my experience of reading the story. (I read the books at least twice before giving the prologue or the appendices more than a brief glance).


You need to be able to distinguish between a literary POV and simple empathy to characters.


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I see and feel things from Treebeard's or Aragorn's or Gandalf's, or even Saruman's perspective; and not just from them personally, but with them operating from and steeped in the particular flavor of the culture or history belonging to that character, which for me at least just doesn't allow it to hold together as if it was from the point of view of an internal character.

Some of it of course does sound like that, but at points where (ahem) it was "meant to," like Sam in Mordor.


The characters with a real POV are the hobbits, as well as Gimli in some cases when none of the hobbits are present. Frodo presumably interviewed Gimli at some point.

Treebeard doesn't have a POV. He tells the other characters what he thinks and the reader sees him from the outside.

Gandalf doesn't have a real POV. There are a couple of lines that directly that tell the reader what he thinks, but Gandalf's solo adventures (as both Grey and White) are explicitly framed as his/their narration to the other characters, quote marks and all, probably because Frodo didn't trust in them enough to make them a normal part of the text.

Aragorn doesn't have a real POV. At one point in the chapter The White Rider the narration breaks away from Gimli's POV for a single sentence that sounds like it was probably added much later in Gondor to make the king look more perceptive. (The Tale of Aragorn and Arwen wasn't part of the original Red Book of Westmarch and so doesn't count.)

Saruman doesn't have a POV.

As for the Éowyn/Aragorn and Éowyn/Faramir romance scenes, these are thoroughly anomalous, and not only in the lack of a hobbit POV, but also including things such as writing style and vocabulary and even themes and content. (Frodo didn't write romance, even when the relationship between Sam and Rosie gave him the perfect opportunity.) The writing is heavy with flowery prose unlike Frodo's, and the scenes use Latinate words such as "knight" where Frodo would have used "rider". None of the characters speak like they do in the rest of the story. The writing is highly reminiscent of The Story of Aragorn and Arwen, though, suggesting that the same Gondorian writer is responsible.

The motive for these additions is that the writer would have been tasked with polishing Aragorn's kingly reputation. The scene between Éowyn and Aragorn makes Aragorn out to be the perfect gentleman and faithful to Arwen, but Éowyn's dramatic reaction afterwards in the parts genuinely written by Frodo suggests that something very different happened between the characters. The later scene between Faramir and Éowyn then wraps up the story to a happy ending for everyone (and conveys the message that Éowyn's baby has no claim to the throne of Gondor, no matter how suspiciously early in the marriage the child might have been born).


noWizardme
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May 17, 9:57am

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"...and fans want it to hold up." [In reply to] Can't Post


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The Red Book of Westmarch fiction only holds up because it was cleverly constructed. And also because it's a very pleasant fiction and fans want it to hold up.


I think fan wishes are an important factor here. If we are thinking about what Tolkien wrote, The Hobbit and LOTR are not straightforwardly book and sequel (or book and prequel). And nor are they straightforwardly related to the collections of postumously-published draft material edited by C Tolkien.

I think this is inconvenient to many fans, who tend to ignore or try to fix the 'problem'.

Back in the 1970s, Paul H Kocher wrote an excellent book of criticism, Master of Middle-earth. He spends much of the chapter on The Hobbit seting out the case for The Hobbit being best imagined (if not actually used) as a tale for an adult to read aloud to children. For example, the "I-You" technique (in which a narrator addresses the audience directly to explain or comment upon the action); or the slapstick and wordplay. He ends by saying:

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The Hobbit was never meant to be a wholly serious tale, nor his young audience to listen without laughing often. In contradistinction, The Lord of the Rings does on occasion evoke smiles, but most of the time its issues go too deep for laughter. In the interval between the two stories the children are sent off to bed and their places taken by grownups, young or young in heart, to hear of a graver sort of quest in which every human life is secretly engaged.

Master of Middle-earth Paul H Kocher 1972 [my italics]


I think that is exactly right. But it is inconvenient to many folks in the fandom who would like to understand (or build upon) Middle-earth as a consistent place. What would suit much of the fandom better, I sometimes think, would be to have the narrator to come back and do an after-the-kids'-bedtime version of The Hobbit.

I wonder whether this is a long-standing thing. Mr Kocher gives a lot of his Hobbit chapter to a patient and excellent case for not taking LOTR as a sequel to The Hobbit (in any straightforward way). That does imply that the 1970s fandom was prone to doing this.

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"I am not made for querulous pests." Frodo 'Spooner' Baggins.

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noWizardme
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May 17, 11:57am

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Ultimately, how important is Bilbo's material wealth? [In reply to] Can't Post

I've been reading these threads and thinking about that.

In terms that a modern reader might recognise, Bilbo might well be the 'most richest hobbit' who ever lived (as they woud say in Hobbiton if they knew). That's just from the gold and 'jools' under the The Hill -- nobody (except possibly Bilbo) knows about that curious coat of mail on display at the Mathom House and how he might buy 'the Shire and everything in it'.

But (as already mentioned by others) the Shire seems a prosperous place where it is hard to imagine, say, the Hardscrabble family in hovels in Brassfarthing. And perhaps the idea of buying or selling the Shire would just seem ridiculous to the Hobbits. Very sensible.

I wonder whether Bilbo Baggins owns his status more from being the Baggins, with the deference and social duties being the senior member of the local big family implies*. I'd guess that these sorts of social transactions are more important than any financial or material transactions.


Of course Bilbo's mysteriously-acquired wealth is interesting. And also of course: why would any hobbit pass up the chance of a free feast (bringing up young hobbits takes a lot of provinder, after all). But I can't imagine Bilbo like some modern celebrity with a court of hangers-on.

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*If we want to risk relating things to the cultural situation around Tolkien it would be worth noting that he grew up in an age that had its own culture wars. But (as always?) if people stop shouting at each other they realise they are shouting past each other and they have several thoughts in common.
So, for example, there were two political movements both holding the idea that the rich may (or should) keep their smials, ranks and privileges. But that the powerful ought to fulfill their duties 'downwards' to the 'lower orders' of society. On that argument alone one can't tell a One-nation Tory from a Christian Socialist. Neither of those tribes seems to have been as prominent in Britain recent decades as they were in Tolkien's life-time.

Take Lotho for contrast. The Shire is to be 'modernised', and opened up to international trade. One day when I have nothing to do, I might adopt a false name and put out something 'proving' that Lotho is a critique of Thatcherism. It's a reading that works perfectly well but of course can't possibly be right: when LOTR first published Mrs Thatcher was a recently-qualified young barrister with political ambitions that had not yet become her '-ism'.
Oooooh - or possibly she got it all from reading LOTR? Evil

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"I am not made for querulous pests." Frodo 'Spooner' Baggins.


Curious
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May 17, 12:20pm

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Tolkien’s childhood village probably had few poor people. [In reply to] Can't Post

If people couldn’t find work in rural England towards the end of the 19th century, they could move to the nearest industrial town or even emigrate to one of the many British colonies. So I doubt that there were any homeless and unemployed people in Tolkien’s village. And if there were — perhaps because they were sick or feeble — the prosperous village could come together and take care of them.


Ethel Duath
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May 17, 2:17pm

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POV: Sure they do. All of them. [In reply to] Can't Post

I just have to disagree with all your points.

I'm clear about the difference between empathy for characters and author's point of view, although, of course, the author himsef writes in such a way as to encourage empathy where appropriate to his purposes.

And "empathy" has nothing to do with the sense of and descriptions of deep culture Tolkien gives us so skillfully and naturally, such as with characters like Aragorn and Treebeard, which is very much part of their POV, and what gives the reader a fuller idea of and feel for their respective characters.

And I certainly don't have any empathy for Saruman--and Saruman's own personal point of view is ultimately very, very clear (and icy cold).



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Ethel Duath
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May 17, 2:43pm

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""Xenophilia" [In reply to] Can't Post

Yes, to me, that's one of the most striking changes, although perhaps he was inwardly more open to "the other" than he himself realized, since before his adventures there weren't, perhaps, all that many opportunities to test that quality.



Curious
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May 17, 2:51pm

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Bilbo -- and Frodo as his heir -- are probably landlords. [In reply to] Can't Post

Tolkien never gives us any details, but in rural England during his childhood much of the land was owned by very few aristocrats or landed gentry who rented it out to farmers. Bag End probably had a vast estate that came with it, leased by farmers all around the area.

The farmers could be very prosperous, but they still didn't own their land and were dependent on the good will of the land owner. Look at what happened when Lotho-Sackville Baggins took the place of Frodo. He was a bad landlord.

So all the hobbits on Bilbo's land tried to stay on good terms with their landlord, and the same when Frodo inherited. The Gaffer's forgiving attitude towards Bilbo and Frodo, despite their eccentricities, was probably typical of anyone who rented their land. And the Gaffer's rebuke of Frodo when he returned was typical as well, for a good landlord should care for the people on his land and should not sell to a bad landlord.

On the other hand, anyone who was not renting land from Bilbo or Frodo may have been jealous, because they were unusually generous land owners. That's probably why there was so much speculation that Bilbo had brought home another source of wealth.

Yet that other source of wealth may have been nothing but a couple of bags of gold from the troll's horde. That gold could go a long way when Bilbo was already independently wealthy and didn't really need it. That's especially true if he found a way to invest it, perhaps by buying even more land.


Ethel Duath
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May 17, 2:51pm

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" . . the hobbits are better than they seem." [In reply to] Can't Post

That's a really good way of putting it. And, yes, really consistent. I think that's what makes us love the Hobbits so thoroughly. They don' look fair and feel foul, they look petty and feel, tenacious, loyal, and generous.



Ethel Duath
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May 17, 3:04pm

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"The I-You technique" [In reply to] Can't Post

Yes, that never bothered me as a kid, first reading it in late grade school. It did later, as a teen, but then teens don't like being told what to think. Wink

That really clarifies things--the idea of the Hobbit being written with something of a "read aloud to kids" sort of intention. My father read aloud to me, and later to the whole family well into my teens (by that time it was National Geographic travel books, or art history kinds of things), and Tolkien was always telling stories to his kids, so I think it would be a very natural thing for him to have written the Hobbit in that way.

I thought I had that book, but I must not, because I don't remember that at all.

Anyway, that finally causes those authorly asides to make perfect sense to me. Thanks!



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Ethel Duath
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May 17, 3:11pm

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That makes a lot of sense. [In reply to] Can't Post

And it would go a long way towards explaining the jealousy.

Oddly, apparently much of England is still, somehow, controlled by the old landed gentry: https://www.theguardian.com/...et-landowners-author



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Silvered-glass
Lorien

May 17, 5:57pm

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Consistency [In reply to] Can't Post


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I think fan wishes are an important factor here. If we are thinking about what Tolkien wrote, The Hobbit and LOTR are not straightforwardly book and sequel (or book and prequel). And nor are they straightforwardly related to the collections of postumously-published draft material edited by C Tolkien.


Tolkien himself said in a letter that LotR turned out to really have become a sequel to The Silmarillion.

And now I look at it, the magnitude of the disaster is apparent to me. My work has escaped from my control, and I have produced a monster: an immensely long, complex, rather bitter, and very terrifying romance, quite unfit for children (if fit for anybody); and it is not really a sequel to The Hobbit, but to The Silmarillion.
-- Letter 124

Tolkien originally did start writing LotR as a Hobbit sequel though. LotR just got out of hand in length and mature tone and Silmarillion references.


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I think that is exactly right. But it is inconvenient to many folks in the fandom who would like to understand (or build upon) Middle-earth as a consistent place. What would suit much of the fandom better, I sometimes think, would be to have the narrator to come back and do an after-the-kids'-bedtime version of The Hobbit.

I wonder whether this is a long-standing thing. Mr Kocher gives a lot of his Hobbit chapter to a patient and excellent case for not taking LOTR as a sequel to The Hobbit (in any straightforward way). That does imply that the 1970s fandom was prone to doing this.


Kocher is talking about the tone, but world-building details are another thing entirely. Tolkien was very strict about consistency. The posthumous materials are contradictory because Tolkien hadn't finished hammering out the details for publication and was still in the process of changing things, plus Christopher would often go on to publish both earlier and later drafts of the same story.

Tolkien was also aware of the change in the writing style in LotR and justified it with the change of the original in-world author from Bilbo to Frodo. Bilbo and Frodo are very different as characters, and that comes through in their writing.

It's like how you can two people from the same street in the same town in the real world write books about interesting things that happened to them, but if one person is good at seeing the lighter side of things and the other one is depressed, you might ask if the stories can really be reconciled together as descriptions of the same town.


Curious
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May 17, 9:18pm

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Farmland is more concentrated in the U.S. than ever before. [In reply to] Can't Post

Less than two percent of U.S. farmland owners hold over a third of U.S. farmland. That's not as concentrated as the U.K., but it is far more concentrated than it used to be. The trend is towards more and more concentrated ownership.


Silvered-glass
Lorien

May 17, 9:22pm

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I just have to disagree with all your points.

I'm clear about the difference between empathy for characters and author's point of view, although, of course, the author himsef writes in such a way as to encourage empathy where appropriate to his purposes.

And "empathy" has nothing to do with the sense of and descriptions of deep culture Tolkien gives us so skillfully and naturally, such as with characters like Aragorn and Treebeard, which is very much part of their POV, and what gives the reader a fuller idea of and feel for their respective characters.

And I certainly don't have any empathy for Saruman--and Saruman's own personal point of view is ultimately very, very clear (and icy cold).


You have empathy for Saruman, but you don't have sympathy for him. Those are two different things. The concept of a point of view (in literature) is a third different thing. I was not talking about authorial point of view (though Tolkien certainly had his own opinions) and also not about the characters being well-realized as characters (which they are) with their own independent motivations (which are part of good character writing). A particular character having or not having a POV is a neutral judgement. Lacking a POV doesn't make someone into a bad character.

A point-of-view character is a character "through whose eyes" the story (in whole or in part) is told. Watson in the Sherlock Holmes stories is a good example.


Ethel Duath
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May 17, 9:28pm

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Yes, it certainly is. And being from a farm state [In reply to] Can't Post

originally, I've watched this happen with a lot of personal dismay. In some ways, I'd rather have "landed gentry" than big corporate farms, although I'm not too thrilled with either.



Ethel Duath
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May 17, 9:41pm

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Well, I think you misunderstood what I meant by "Point of view," [In reply to] Can't Post

and I know about the difference in the use of these terms. And of course characters aren't bad or poorly written for lacking the POV type you mentioned (I never have thought so. Seems to me that would be a very odd reason).

But that isn't at all what I was talking about, except, of course, in referencing an "internal narrator" (Red Book of W. idea, among others). Other than that, I wasn't speaking in technical terms, or using POV in the formal sense you mention, but simply in terms of the actual character's personal, internal point of view from within the story. And my reason for this was to give one example of why an "internal" narrator, in the sense you mention where the story is told through the eyes of, say "Frodo," doesn't really hold water for every part of the book, although it certainly works for some portions. (Which is not a criticism of Tolkien's writing, but just an observation.) We're talking not about apples and oranges but something almost as different as, say, apples and sidewalks.

And of course empathy and sympathy are different. I'm not sure why you may think I've confused them, or of why you may think I'm unaware of the difference.

But I have neither for Saruman.



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Silvered-glass
Lorien

May 17, 10:01pm

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I've been reading these threads and thinking about that.

In terms that a modern reader might recognise, Bilbo might well be the 'most richest hobbit' who ever lived (as they woud say in Hobbiton if they knew). That's just from the gold and 'jools' under the The Hill -- nobody (except possibly Bilbo) knows about that curious coat of mail on display at the Mathom House and how he might buy 'the Shire and everything in it'.

But (as already mentioned by others) the Shire seems a prosperous place where it is hard to imagine, say, the Hardscrabble family in hovels in Brassfarthing. And perhaps the idea of buying or selling the Shire would just seem ridiculous to the Hobbits. Very sensible.


The Shire had large differences in social status and in housing quality between the rich and the poor:

Actually in the Shire in Bilbo’s days it was, as a rule, only the richest and the poorest Hobbits that maintained the old custom. The poorest went on living in burrows of the most primitive kind, mere holes indeed, with only one window or none; while the well-to-do still constructed more luxurious versions of the simple diggings of old. But suitable sites for these large and ramifying tunnels (or smials as they called them) were not everywhere to be found; and in the flats and the low-lying districts the Hobbits, as they multiplied, began to build above ground.
-- Prologue

The quote also confirms that the Shire was experiencing population growth, which might have bad long-term implications on the woodlands of the Shire.

Also Hobbiton was just a country village, while Michel Delving was much larger and the capital of the Shire:

Indeed, even in the hilly regions and the older villages, such as Hobbiton or Tuckborough, or in the chief township of the Shire, Michel Delving on the White Downs, there were now many houses of wood, brick, or stone.
-- Prologue

I wonder if Michel Delving might even have an express train to somewhere? Or would soon?

But about "buying or selling the Shire" I think Lotho really did it. The Sackville-Baggins income from foreign trade was so high that Lotho could just buy anything he wished. The Shire didn't mint its own money and didn't originally have that much in circulation. That's why Saruman paying what was the going price in other lands was able to upend the entire economy.


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Take Lotho for contrast. The Shire is to be 'modernised', and opened up to international trade. One day when I have nothing to do, I might adopt a false name and put out something 'proving' that Lotho is a critique of Thatcherism. It's a reading that works perfectly well but of course can't possibly be right: when LOTR first published Mrs Thatcher was a recently-qualified young barrister with political ambitions that had not yet become her '-ism'.
Oooooh - or possibly she got it all from reading LOTR? Evil


I think Lotho is best compared to the dictator of a banana republic.


Ethel Duath
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May 17, 10:39pm

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Some thoughts [In reply to] Can't Post

1. What is the change in Bilbo? Is it just that he's creating verse? Has he come to have a new appreciation of the Shire itself outside of Bag End? Do friendships with the Dwarves, Beorn Gandalf, and the Elves indicate that Bilbo the solitary bachelor has learned to form relationships?

I think some of this, including the fact that "his visions never include any part of the Shire outside Bag End, and never any other hobbits. He wishes for the comfort and security of his house. He never misses anything else about the Shire, not the green grass, not the Inn, nor the 'decent folk'" may partly be because we are simply not told, and I think that is partly because it is a shorter (not short) "older children's story" where too many descriptive details would complicate the more straightforward simplicity of a story meant for younger folks. (Of course, both "straightforward" and "simplicity" are relative; and among children's books in general, the Hobbit is pretty complex and less straightforward than many.)

But the fact that on his return he mentions all those Shire-ish things may show he missed them all along. More than that, though, I think it shows how he has changed. He no longer goes through life on the surface, taking contentment and his comfortable life for granted, with occasion thoughts of Elves and Dwarves. He knows his own insides better now. His experiences on the quest would have given him the opportunity for a huge change in perspective, not just because of the adventures or of seeing new places, but of having (and sometimes engineering) experiences that should (and I think did) highlight the importance and also the worth and meaning of the Shire. That may even have been the beginning, in Tolkien's mind, of turning Bilbo's unnamed location into a more definite, fleshed-out sort of country.

And, yes, he did sound like he was pretty happy being largely solitary before he first left home. I think that even if he was a confirmed and contented introvert, the crucible of his joint adventures with the others would naturally create bonds, and like battlefield friendships would naturally tend to be lasting. I'm not sure how much that might spill over into creating new friendships in general, but in Bilbo's case, I think it actually did, except that he reached out to his relatives not his neighbors, and then only those who were more like-minded, so I'm not at all sure if he had a profound increase in the desire for friendship. He did, however, seem to become definitely more sociable, which was a lasting change, judging by the glimpses we see of his sojourn in Rivendell in LOTR.




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Silvered-glass
Lorien

May 17, 10:40pm

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and I know about the difference in the use of these terms. And of course characters aren't bad or poorly written for lacking the POV type you mentioned (I never have thought so. Seems to me that would be a very odd reason).

But that isn't at all what I was talking about, except, of course, in referencing an "internal narrator" (Red Book of W. idea, among others). Other than that, I wasn't speaking in technical terms, or using POV in the formal sense you mention, but simply in terms of the actual character's personal, internal point of view from within the story. And my reason for this was to give one example of why an "internal" narrator, in the sense you mention where the story is told through the eyes of, say "Frodo," doesn't really hold water for every part of the book, although it certainly works for some portions. (Which is not a criticism of Tolkien's writing, but just an observation.) We're talking not about apples and oranges but something almost as different as, say, apples and sidewalks.


I kind of suspected that you meant something along the lines of "actual character's personal, internal point of view from within the story", but that just sounds like you're describing good characterization where the characters' individual internal thoughts and feelings are conveyed to the reader through some means. I was 100% talking about the technical term. Someone like Treebeard explaining his motivations through external dialogue does nothing against the idea that Bilbo and Frodo wrote the Red Book of Westmarch, as far as I can understand.


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And of course empathy and sympathy are different. I'm not sure why you may think I've confused them, or of why you may think I'm unaware of the difference.

But I have neither for Saruman.


You claimed that Saruman had a POV and you described it as "icy cold", which gave me the impression that you were modeling Saruman's emotions (or the lack of them) with your own emotional system. Being able to have empathy for a villain doesn't make you a bad person.


Ethel Duath
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May 17, 10:45pm

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Saruman: nope, just an observation. [In reply to] Can't Post

Psychopaths, which I think could easily describe Saruman, are often described as "cold."



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CuriousG
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May 17, 11:52pm

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I think we feel sort of programmed to find one fault with a person, place, or thing, and then rain fire & brimstone on them and cancel them. So I say that for my own context: I love the Shire and always feel like it's a place I'd like to live (as a Baggins), but one detail does give me pause, which you cited:


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The poorest went on living in burrows of the most primitive kind, mere holes indeed, with only one window or none;

That just plain sounds rotten, living in a dirt hole. As a boy in the countryside, my friends and I often dug into dirt banks to make little caves, always in pursuit of some type of fort or secret hideout, so I can say from experience that sitting in a dirt hole is unpleasant and not a place you'd want to live, and I wouldn't want it to be anyone's home.

That's not going to make me condemn the socioeconomic structure or culture of the Shire, nor condemn Tolkien as cold and heartless (did someone mention psychopath? kidding!). But it doesn't sit well with me, I must admit. The gossip, the xenophobia, etc: I can write that off as human nature.

At the same time, the Shire feels free of social suffering. Frodo doesn't pass beggars in the street, and Bilbo's party is a fun-fest, not a soup kitchen. So I've made a whole post about one line, and I don't want to rain on any "Praise the Shire with Great Praise!" parades, so I'll just say that one is best to skip over, at least for me.


oliphaunt
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May 18, 2:47am

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I imagine the 'primitive kind' of hobbit holes to be more the equivalent of, say, gold miners' shacks of the 1800's having 'only one window or none.' rather than like living in a soggy carboard shipping carton under a railroad trestle. i should think that after centuries of hobbit-hole building experience, even the meanest burrow was engineered to be far more comfortable than your childhood excavations. Is this comment not somewhat tongue-in-cheek?


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Silvered-glass
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I think we feel sort of programmed to find one fault with a person, place, or thing, and then rain fire & brimstone on them and cancel them. So I say that for my own context: I love the Shire and always feel like it's a place I'd like to live (as a Baggins), but one detail does give me pause, which you cited:


No need to bring (political) cancel culture into this. I'm not trying to "cancel" the Shire!


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That just plain sounds rotten, living in a dirt hole. As a boy in the countryside, my friends and I often dug into dirt banks to make little caves, always in pursuit of some type of fort or secret hideout, so I can say from experience that sitting in a dirt hole is unpleasant and not a place you'd want to live, and I wouldn't want it to be anyone's home.


It is important to remember that the hobbits aren't the same as humans, including in their psychology, despite how Tolkien uses English-derived names to increase immersion and relatability as part of his "translation convention". Hobbits have among their quirks a strong innate preference for living underground and, as oliphaunt says, have been developing their construction techniques for centuries. The middle-class hobbits also would love to live underground. Their problem is that there aren't enough good hill-sides for construction left, especially in desirable locations such as near Michel Delving, with the growing hobbit population (and population density) in the Shire, plus building above-ground is cheaper, so the middle-class hobbits choose what can get them more rooms with the same money.


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That's not going to make me condemn the socioeconomic structure or culture of the Shire, nor condemn Tolkien as cold and heartless (did someone mention psychopath? kidding!). But it doesn't sit well with me, I must admit. The gossip, the xenophobia, etc: I can write that off as human nature.

At the same time, the Shire feels free of social suffering. Frodo doesn't pass beggars in the street, and Bilbo's party is a fun-fest, not a soup kitchen. So I've made a whole post about one line, and I don't want to rain on any "Praise the Shire with Great Praise!" parades, so I'll just say that one is best to skip over, at least for me.


It should be possible to enjoy fictional media without demanding unrealistic utopian perfection in fantasy locations. Tolkien never meant for the Shire to be a utopia. He cared too much about world-building to do that, and the literary utopias of the utopia genre never hold up on a close examination. Tolkien designed the Shire to have realistic social and economic dynamics, though he wisely avoided burying the reader under too much background information.

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